Tim Brecht

Professor Emeritus

Davis Center, Room 3508
David R. Cheriton School of Computer Science
University of Waterloo
200 University Ave. West
Waterloo, ON N2L 3G1, Canada

E-mail: brecht AT uwaterloo DOT ca

A Simple Approach to Thesis Writing

(Adapted from "The Guaranteed Mackworth Thesis Formula", by Alan Mackworth, revised by Tim Brecht, thanks to Ondrej Lhotak for an addition to the Background and Related Work section)

Abstract (<= 1 page)

one page stating what the thesis is about
highlight the contributions of the thesis

Chapter 1: Introduction (~5-10 pages)

Thesis Statement (one or two sentences)

What is your thesis about and what have you done?
If you have a hypothesis what is it?
How will you test (prove/disprove) your hypothesis?

Here is some more information about and examples of some thesis statements.

Motivation

Why is this problem you've worked on important

Goals / Objectives

What are you trying to do and why?
How will you or the reader know if or when you've met your objectives?

**** Contributions *****

What is new, different, better, significant?
Why is the world a better place because of what you've done?
What have you contributed to the field of research?
What is now known/possible/better because of your thesis?

Outline of the thesis (optional)

Chapter 2: Background / Related Work (~8-20 pages)

More than a literature review
Organize related work - impose structure
The related work section in many papers are very poorly done. They seem to be there to simply ensure that the authors have cited the relevant work without providing any useful information or insights. This is not a proper related work section.
When describing related work that is most relevant the authors need to explain what they did, why they did it (to some extent) AND what they found.
Then be clear as to how previous work being described relates to your own. How is it similar? How is it different? Is the methodology different? How and why? Are the findings diferrent or not? How and why?
The reader should not be left wondering why you've described something!!
Critique the existing work - Where is it strong where is it weak? What are the unreasonable/undesirable assumptions?
Identify opportunities for more research (i.e., your thesis) Are there unaddressed, or more important related topics?
After reading this chapter, one should understand the motivation for and importance of your thesis
You should clearly and precisely define all of the key concepts dealt with in the rest of the thesis, and teach the reader what s/he needs to know to understand the rest of the thesis.

Chapter 3: Theory / Solution / Program / Problem (~15-30 pages)

continuing from Chapter 2 explain the issues
outline your solution / extension / refutation

Chapter 4: Implementation / Formalism (~15-30 pages)

not every thesis has or needs an implementation

Chapter 5: Results and Evaluation (~15-30 pages)

adequacy, efficiency, productiveness, effectiveness (choose your criteria, state them clearly and justify them)
be careful that you are using a fair measure, and that you are actually measuring what you claim to be measuring
if comparing with previous techniques those techniques must be described in Chapter 2
be honest in evaluation
admit weaknesses

Chapter 6: Conclusions and Future Work (~5-10 pages)

State what you've done and what you've found
Summarize contributions (achievements and impact)
Outline open issues/directions for future work

Bibliography / References

Include references to:

credit others for their work
help to distinguish your work from others
provide pointers to further detailed readings
support your claims (if evidence can be found in others work)

Ensure that ALL bibliographic entries are complete including: authors, title, journal or conference, volume and number of journals, date of publication and page numbers. Be careful to at least be consistent in punctuation.
Learn how to use a good typesetting program that can track and format bibliographic references (e.g., groff, latex, frame).
Within the text of the thesis, a reference with a number of people can be referred to as Lastname et al. (where et al appears in italics and the al is followed by a period).
My personal view is that URL's are not valid bibliographic references. They and their contents change and they often contain material that has not been refereed.

Appendix

Include technical material that would disrupt the flow of the thesis.
Included for curious or disbelieving readers

Writing Hints

Before handing in a copy of what you've written you should proof read it and make corrections yourself. Be critical of your own work when you do this. You should think not only about syntax and grammar but about the structure of the document and whether or not your are making good arguments and whether or not someone else will be able to follow and believe what you are saying. You should repeat this process a large number of times before you hand in a copy. Far too many people type something in, print it out and hand it in. If this is the case you as a student are not doing your job. It is not your supervisor's job to write your thesis.
Try to aim for around 100 pages or less.
Including a glossary or list of acronyms may be helpful.
Start thinking about what your contributions are early on.

How is what you are doing interesting and important?
How will it make the world a better place?
What are you doing or discovering that hasn't already been done or isn't already known?

For many people it is best to start by writing the "guts" of the thesis, Chapters 3, 4 and 5. In some cases the results and conclusions may not be known (or may change) while doing these chapters.
Chapters 3,4 and 5 can take on different forms depending on the thesis and approaches being used.
Sometimes design, implementation and performance are subsections within chapters and the chapters are broken down by other criteria.
Remember (especially those doing experiments) that you must include enough detail in your thesis so that someone else could read your thesis and reproduce your results - without ever talking to you.
The word performance is by itself quite meaningless. Stating that you've improved performance significantly does not tell the reader anything. There are problems with the word performance and the word improved. Remember that there are often a number of different performance metrics that can be applied to a system. Instead of using the word performance state precisely what performance metric is improved. Also improved may also be potentially ambiguous. State precisely what you mean. For example: The mean response time has been decreased by 20%. Peak bandwidth has been increased by 40%.
Try to get an outline and style guidelines from someone else for the system you use for formatting your thesis.
All figures included should add to the work. As such, there should be text included that refers to the figures (preferably before the figure is encountered). The text should explain what the reader should get from the figure - what are they supposed to notice and what is the figure explaining. Often people just include a figure with no reference to the figure and no explanation of what the figure is for - if the figure was not included no one would notice (this is not a good approach). Note that when referring to a figure or a section by name they should be capitalized as in -- Figure 3 shows the architecture of our system or in Section 4 we describe the experimental methodology.
Newest pet peeve. You do not write 3.3GHz or 16GB you write 3.3 GHz or 16 GB. This is equivalent to saying you are 6feet tall (instead of 6 feet tall).
Using and misusing abbreviations.

The word "it's" is an abbreviation of "it is" it is NOT a possessive form of "it".
The abbreviation of the phrase "for example" is written "e.g.". It contains a period after the "e" and one after the "g". A comma is also usually required with its use. This is an sentence that uses "for example" (e.g., this is how to use for example). Quite often it is enclosed in parentheses and you should avoid using it too often.
The abbreviation of the phrase "that is" is written "i.e.". It contains a period after the "i" and one after the "e". A comma is also usually required with is use. This is a sentence containing an example of how to use "that is" (i.e., this sentence is the example). Quite often it is enclosed in parentheses and you should avoid using it too often.
Don't use the abbreviation "etc.". The use of etc. is usually an admission of ignorance. It is like admitting that the list you've given is not complete but you don't know what is missing. If you did know what was missing the list would be complete".

You should purchase and use a book like "The Elements of Style" by Stunk and White.

Plagiarism

You must not make modifications to someone else's work and include it in your own work.
If you want to explain someone else's work the best approach is to read it over, put it aside, and then write in your own words what that work is about (do this without referring to the original source).

Useful Links

Latex thesis templates for UW
See the Section "UW E-Thesis Template".
The Elements of Style
Writing for Computer Science: The Art of Effective Communication, Justin Zobel, Springer, 1998

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